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The Forgotten Echoes


In a secluded village nestled deep within an ancient forest, there was an old house that everyone whispered about but never dared approach. Known as Blackthorn Manor, it stood in eerie isolation, its windows darkened by grime, its doors hanging slightly ajar as if inviting the curious to step into its ominous shadows. Over the years, locals had shared chilling tales of those who entered and never returned.

Forgotten echoes


The story began with Elise, a 24-year-old journalist eager to break into the big leagues. She wasn’t afraid of ghost stories or superstitions, dismissing them as exaggerated folklore. When Elise stumbled upon rumors of Blackthorn Manor while researching urban legends, her curiosity was piqued. Determined to prove herself, she packed her camera, flashlight, and a notebook, ready to unravel the truth behind the village’s mysterious landmark.


Arriving at the edge of the village as the sun dipped below the horizon, Elise was greeted with silence that felt almost alive. The villagers she had encountered earlier refused to discuss the manor. One elderly man, trembling, had whispered, “It’s not the house you should fear—it’s what lingers within.”


As she approached Blackthorn Manor, its sheer size loomed over her like a giant’s shadow. Ivy crept across its cracked walls, and an overwhelming sense of foreboding settled in her chest. Elise hesitated for a moment, her rational mind battling the unease gnawing at her nerves. But she pressed on.


Inside, the air was heavy and stale. The once-grand foyer was now a graveyard of decayed furniture and peeling wallpaper. Every creak of the floorboards echoed like a warning. Determined, Elise raised her flashlight and began documenting the interior.


It wasn’t long before strange occurrences began. As she climbed the grand staircase, she felt the unmistakable sensation of eyes on her. Pausing, she turned to look behind her, but the hall below was empty.


Room by room, Elise explored the manor. One peculiar discovery was a dusty mirror that hung crookedly in a bedroom. Its surface was marred with cracks, but something about it drew her closer. As she wiped away the dust, she gasped. The reflection staring back wasn’t hers. Instead, she saw a gaunt, pale woman with hollow eyes and a smile that sent chills down her spine.


Elise stumbled back, her heart racing. When she looked at the mirror again, it was just her own frightened face staring back. Dismissing it as her imagination, she decided to leave the room.


Then she heard it—a faint whisper. It sounded like her name being called. “Elise...”


Her blood ran cold. Gripping her flashlight tightly, she called out, “Who’s there?” The only response was a low hum that seemed to vibrate through the walls. She followed the sound, descending into the basement.


The basement was suffocatingly dark, save for the faint glow of her flashlight. Shelves lined with jars of unidentifiable contents seemed to watch her as she passed. In the corner, she noticed a worn leather journal lying on a small table. Opening it, she realized it belonged to a man named Harold Blackthorn, the last known resident of the manor.


The entries grew increasingly erratic:

"They are here. Always watching. They will not let me leave."

"The mirror is the key, but it also holds the curse."

"To anyone who finds this: Do not trust your eyes."


The final page was smeared with blood.


A sudden, piercing scream shattered the silence, causing Elise to drop the journal. She spun around, but the basement was empty. The air, however, felt alive—thick with an unseen presence. Her flashlight flickered, and in its dying beam, she saw them: shadowy figures slithering along the walls, their shapes twisting and writhing unnaturally.


Panic surged through her as she stumbled back up the stairs, the whispers growing louder, more insistent. When she reached the mirror in the bedroom, she realized Harold was right. The reflection showed the manor, but it wasn’t the one she was in. This version of the house was pristine, filled with light, and yet... something was terribly wrong.


Her own reflection raised a hand and pointed behind her. Elise turned, but there was no one there. When she looked back at the mirror, her reflection was gone.


By the time villagers found Elise’s belongings near the manor weeks later, she was long gone. But sometimes, on quiet nights, villagers swear they can hear her calling for help from within the walls of Blackthorn Manor.


And the mirror? It still hangs there, waiting for its next visitor.


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