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 The Stranger in the Fog


It was well past midnight when Aarav’s car suddenly broke down. He was on an empty stretch of road, with nothing but thick fog around him. The fog was so dense that it swallowed the light from his car’s headlights, leaving him unable to see more than a few feet ahead. Aarav checked his phone for help, but there was no signal, and the nearest town was miles away. He knew he had no choice but to start walking.

The fog was cold and damp, wrapping itself around him like a blanket. Every step he took echoed strangely, as if the road beneath him stretched on forever. He kept glancing over his shoulder, feeling an odd pressure on his chest as if someone or something was watching him. But there was nothing—just the thick, gray fog.

Then, he heard it. A faint shuffle, like someone dragging their feet through the fog. Aarav stopped dead in his tracks, his heart skipping a beat. He held his breath and listened, but the sound didn’t stop. It was coming closer.

“Hello?” Aarav called out, his voice shaky.

There was no answer. He stood still, his nerves on edge, telling himself it was just his imagination. “It’s nothing,” he muttered to himself. “Just your imagination playing tricks.”

But when he turned around to keep walking, his eyes caught something in the fog. It was a figure—barely visible, just a dark silhouette standing motionless in the mist. It wasn’t moving. It was just standing there, watching him.

Aarav’s pulse quickened. He felt a chill run down his spine. “Hey! Are you okay? Do you need help?” he called out, trying to make his voice sound confident, though his heart was racing in fear.

The figure didn’t respond. Instead, it began to glide toward him. It didn’t walk like a normal person—it seemed to float through the air, moving toward him without lifting its feet off the ground.

Aarav instinctively took a step back. He had no idea who or what this thing was. "Who are you?" he asked, his voice trembling now.

The figure didn’t answer. It just kept coming closer, until it was only a few feet away. Aarav could now see its face—or what should have been its face. There were no features, no eyes, no nose, no mouth. Just a smooth, pale surface where its face should have been.

Aarav felt his stomach churn. He stumbled back, almost falling to the ground. “What the—” he whispered in shock.

The figure raised one arm. Its fingers were unnaturally long, with sharp claws that seemed to stretch toward him. As the figure pointed at him, the fog around them thickened, swirling in a violent way, and the air became colder. Aarav felt his legs grow heavy, as if they were made of lead. He couldn’t move. His body felt frozen.

Then, he heard it. The whispers.

The whispers came from all around him, as if they were coming from the fog itself. They were soft and overlapping, but Aarav could clearly hear the words. They were all saying the same thing: “Run.”

Aarav didn’t need to be told twice. The fear in his chest grew so strong that his body moved before he could even think. He turned and ran, his feet pounding against the cold asphalt. The fog twisted and turned around him, making it impossible to see where he was going. But he didn’t care. He just had to get away.

The whispers grew louder as he ran. The sound seemed to be chasing him, getting closer with every step. Aarav glanced over his shoulder, but what he saw made his heart stop. The figure was right behind him, moving fast, its faceless head tilted unnaturally, as if it was enjoying his terror.

Its claw-like fingers brushed against his shoulder, sending a jolt of icy fear through his body. Aarav screamed and pushed himself to run faster, his legs burning, his lungs gasping for air. He had to escape.

Then, through the fog, he saw it. A light. A faint glow in the distance. A house.

Without thinking, he sprinted toward it, his body desperate for safety. The whispers were louder now, almost deafening, and the figure’s presence was right behind him, breathing coldly on his neck.

He reached the door of the house and threw himself inside. He slammed the door shut behind him, pressing his back against it, panting hard. His heart felt like it was about to burst. For a moment, everything was quiet. The fog, the whispers, the figure—they were all gone.

Aarav let out a long, shaky breath, feeling like he had just escaped death itself. He stood there for a moment, allowing himself to believe he was safe. But as he took a few steps into the house, he noticed something strange.

The house was completely empty. No furniture, no pictures on the walls, no signs of life at all. It was just a dark, cold, abandoned room. Aarav’s breath caught in his throat. He couldn’t understand why he felt so uneasy, even though he was inside a building now, away from the mist and the figure.

And then he saw it.

In the corner of the room, barely visible in the dim light, stood the figure. It hadn’t followed him inside. It had been here the whole time.

It tilted its head to the side, as if it were amused by Aarav’s fear. The fog, the whispers—it was all part of the same nightmare.

Aarav’s body froze. He couldn’t move. The figure’s presence was unbearable. The whispers started again, louder than before. But this time, they didn’t say “Run.”

This time, the whispers said, “Stay.”

Aarav’s heart skipped a beat. The air around him turned colder, the house itself seeming to grow darker. The figure stepped forward, its clawed fingers reaching for him.

There was nowhere to run now.

And Aarav realized, with growing horror, that he had never been safe at all.

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